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Identify a sound device
11+ English · Language
A short worked example (2:48) for one 11+ English skill: Identify figurative language.
This video shows how to distinguish similes, metaphors and personification from literal descriptions. Watch an 11+ English question solved step by step.
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One sentence can turn the moon into a torch, make the wind whisper, or compare rain to silver threads. Yet only some sentences are figurative. Can you spot which kind?
Figurative language paints a picture instead of meaning every word literally. A simile compares one thing with another using 'like' or 'as'. 'The lake shone like glass' is a simile. The lake is not glass; its smooth brightness is being compared with glass. A metaphor makes the comparison directly, without 'like' or 'as'. 'The playground was a zoo' is a metaphor. It does not mean cages appeared. It directly renames the noisy, wild playground a zoo. Personification gives a human action or feeling to something non-human. 'The wind whispered through the trees' is personification, because whispering is human-like. Now, watch the trap: the words 'like' and 'as' do not automatically create a simile. 'I ran as the bell rang' is literal. Here, 'as' means while; nothing is compared.
Let's work through an example. Read these four sentences. Option A says, The candle flame danced in the draught. Option B says, The candle flame was bright. Option C says, The candle flame was like a tiny star. Option D says, The candle flame was a tiny star. Which sentence uses personification? First, find the subject: the candle flame. It is not human. Next, inspect each key phrase. Sentence B, 'was bright', simply describes real light, so it is literal. Sentence C uses 'like' to compare the flame with a star, so it is a simile. Sentence D says the flame 'was a tiny star' directly, so it is a metaphor. That leaves sentence A. Can a flame really dance? No. 'Danced' gives the flame a human action, so sentence A uses personification. The explicit answer is A: 'The candle flame danced in the draught.' Notice that lively movement alone is not enough; the clue is a recognisably human action given to something non-human.
Remember: 'like' or 'as' comparison means simile; a direct comparison means metaphor; a human quality given to something non-human means personification. You can name the device!
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